Teacher Feedback

1) Camerawork/ Mise-en-Scene

• The lights are very effective. Atmosphere.
• Quality of the footage differs- excellent of katie but close up on the guitar is 'grainy' needs to be re-shot. (Also it doesn't look like katie's really playing.)

2) Editing

• Lip Syncing is effective.Has back and forth from different sections of the video well. More dissolves?
• General pace is good.

3) Genre

• Well performed- look at 'costume' of lead singer. Fits convention of female vocal driver lead singer.

4) Missing

• More close ups of lead singer. Another location, cut to and back from?