Rough Cut Peer Feedback

1) Quality of footage: Camerawork etc

• Lots of Different shots-good range. Good locations.
• Like the variety of shots- Locations are appropriate for the genre
• Some of the footage is bad quality but like the variety of shots and camerawork.
• Really well Lip-synced- looks like really singing song.
• Good variety of shots- excellent lip-syncing.

2) Use of Transitions: Edit Types:

• We love the bit where katie is singing on a bench then fades to katie driving then back again. Lots of editing of shots- quick and clean.
• Good editing between shots, we like the use of fading into other shots.
• Like the Cross fades transitions where you can see sa few shots at once.
• Nice Transitions

3) Evidence of Conventions:

• Playing Guitar - Folk song
• Country blues
• Play the guitar and the setting- country/folk song
• Good setting for the song
• Illusion of castle- to taylor swift- good
• Great locations really suit conventions

4) What is Missing? What needs to be Added?:

• Tighter cuts between clips bt there were a few occasions where there was a gap between
• Could use fades between the clips as the tempo and pace of the music doesn't suit quick instant.