1. Research into similar bands -
There doesn't seem to be lots of research, so maybe you could produce some more. The way you have talked about other videos is great but maybe you could talk about the band themselves too.
2. Storyboard and timeline -
There is no storyboard or timeline up, but we can see it on the table and it looks good, just get it on the blog. There is a good description of storyboard but more visuals needed to attract attention.
3. Test Footage -
There is not any footage on your blog yet so perhaps thats something to think about.
4. The Concept of the Video -
Your idea of the video seems really good and exciting. We hope it goes really well and you get the result you want.
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